You know what? 

"Wheelerguy" (wheelerguy) 07/04/2018 at 21:51 • Filed to: None

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What I need is someone to rip my writing to bits and help me re-do it so it’s better. Link below or in the comments, for a sort of vlog thing required for my math subject about math’s use in the modern world. The whole thing is what I’m supposed to say in the background.

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Go easy on me, but only after you have pointed out the mistakes.

Wheelerguy > Wheelerguy 07/04/2018 at 21:52

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https://wheelerguy.kinja.com/math-tp-captions-1827305567

Thomas Donohue > Wheelerguy 07/04/2018 at 22:01

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I was told it was a holiday and there wouldn’t be any math.

nermal > Wheelerguy 07/04/2018 at 22:06

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I’m sorry in advance.

Future Heap Owner > Wheelerguy 07/04/2018 at 23:39

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I’m always down to kibitz the heck out of writing if someone wants me to.

Future Heap Owner > Future Heap Owner 07/04/2018 at 23:39

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Also I do technically have a degree in mathematics, so: domain “ expertise” .

Wheelerguy > Future Heap Owner 07/04/2018 at 23:42

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Well no, no discussion of actual math in the eventual video, just something of a "Math and You" kind of deal.