Writing Shit: Finally wrote the introduction to my antagonist! 

Kinja'd!!! "Anon" (tjsielsistneb)
02/27/2015 at 19:26 • Filed to: None

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For those who do and do not care, here's the automotive hero of my story, A four litre turbo diesel FJ62 Land Cruiser. Introduction paragraph after the jump.

"Announcing Finnegan Joseph Malardi, third in command of 'Section Seven'." Dominick announced into the cavernous office. The room's round white walls were covered with countless famous paintings, doubtless gifts from various countries. Then, in front of the large room's glass wall sat a man in front of a stately large oak desk, of which's weight had to be measured in the tons. The man was broad around the shoulders. His well trimmed white beard contrasted greatly from his slim fitting black suit. His face had many wrinkles, though with his strong facial features, they did not make him look aged. His wrinkles, it seemed, only made him seem wise and experienced in the ways of the world. However, despite all of these things, the one feature Finnegan noticed at first glance were his grey eyes. His eyes were not hazed over like one would expect, instead they were clear and full of energy. They were the eyes of a man inspired. Though Finnegan had been planning to make a brash entrance and intimidate the man into freeing Blair before he could unleash hell upon his very soul, he stood there frozen by the man's majesty and power. Finnegan had finally realized how this man was able to conquer the world. Hugo was not a man but an unyielding force of nature who could destroy a typhoon with his sheer will. Hugo's force was not that of good or evil, the very concept of good and evil bowed to this man's will. Finnegan was not dealing with a man, he was dealing with a god named Hugo Risenburn.

I really hate to use the term antagonist as Hugo is more morally ambiguous than anything else. He does what he believes is the best for mankind even if the entire world will hate him for it. His main motivation is just that he wants his nine year old daughter to grow up in a better world than he was raised in. Heading for the sympathetic antagonist. Also he's Swiss just to have some fun with the idea that the Swiss are always peaceful.


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Kinja'd!!! HammerheadFistpunch > Anon
02/27/2015 at 19:32

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watching this right now.


Kinja'd!!! Anon > HammerheadFistpunch
02/27/2015 at 19:44

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Damn, 67 decibles on the highway would make me want to just walk if was on road.


Kinja'd!!! HammerheadFistpunch > Anon
02/27/2015 at 19:50

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67 isn't that bad, its quieter than a washing machine. Now the 12H-T that Hugo drives....ooof.


Kinja'd!!! HammerheadFistpunch > Anon
02/27/2015 at 19:51

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FYI a turbo diesel 60 series is an HJ61

134 hp and 232 ft-lbs? what a charge!


Kinja'd!!! Anon > HammerheadFistpunch
02/27/2015 at 20:00

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Oh thanks! I'll correct that!