My friend is writing a fictional narrative essay about buzz aldrin

"aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe" (emaxxbl) 09/14/2015 at 16:46 • Filed to: None

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This is what he sent me so far.

My eyes begin to twitch open as light emerges like the sun breaking the horizon at dawn. As my surroundings became clearer I noticed my clock, it read “5:31 AM.” I thought to myself, “Ah, plenty of time for more sleep” but my body felt inclined to ignore my thoughts. As I begin to rise out of bed, my ears are greeted with a familiar noise, Bacon.

norskracer98-ExploringTheOutback > aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe 09/14/2015 at 16:50

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wat

Ike > aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe 09/14/2015 at 16:51

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Bacon being cooked sounds like applause

That is all

DrScientist > aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe 09/14/2015 at 16:51

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light emerges like the sun breaking the

is light emerging like the sun? or is the light emerging actually the sun? 5:31 could definitely be dawn in some places, some times of the year.

aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe > norskracer98-ExploringTheOutback 09/14/2015 at 16:53

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Bacon

norskracer98-ExploringTheOutback > aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe 09/14/2015 at 16:54

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truuuu

aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe > Ike 09/14/2015 at 16:54

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citizennick > aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe 09/14/2015 at 16:54

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your friend needs to lay off the drugs, man.

Moenica > aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe 09/14/2015 at 16:55

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I agree, that is some terrible writing. Thank you for sharing.

Sam > aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe 09/14/2015 at 16:55

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Is Buzz a superhero that punches moon landing deniers?

aberson Bresident of the FullyAssed Committe > citizennick 09/14/2015 at 16:57

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Bacon is the one and only drug.