![]() 02/12/2015 at 23:35 • Filed to: PHOTOHUNT | ![]() | ![]() |
This round works a little different. This time the posts will be judged, instead of chosen nby the time that they are posted.
The Challenge: (Itchys2) "a picture of your vehicle with a orange/pink sun set sky in the back ground."
Picture from Itchys2 also.
Also, 505 where you at? Gimme a challenge!
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When do we judge the winner?
![]() 02/12/2015 at 23:54 |
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When the thrill of speed overcomes the fear of death.
![]() 02/12/2015 at 23:57 |
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Hey... got anything on my paper yet? It's almost like you went off the face of the earth... also sorry if I'm rushing you :(
![]() 02/13/2015 at 00:01 |
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Oh no man, I'm just away from my computer. I'll have my notes to you by tomorrow.
![]() 02/13/2015 at 00:05 |
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SHIIIIIIT
It's due tomorrow... oh well *sigh*
Just don't worry about it then
![]() 02/13/2015 at 00:08 |
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Haha! I feel ya, if I don't finish a paper an hour before it's due something's terribly wrong. I'll see if I can't make some speed revisions will you still be up in an hour?
![]() 02/13/2015 at 00:09 |
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Soooo..thursday?
![]() 02/13/2015 at 00:09 |
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Yeah, around 5:00PM.
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Yeah, I should be... still putting together my citation page... then I have to do my in text citations. This is taking longer than I would've thought :(
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Sent my edit.
![]() 02/13/2015 at 01:08 |
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Thanks! I made the edits exactly as you had them. CMD + F is very useful :)
Thanks for the help!
![]() 02/13/2015 at 01:09 |
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No prob, just want to help people graduate with a better GPA than I did. That shit's important. Though if you need my help again I would prefer if you got it to me earlier so I could go more in depth.
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Yes it is... I have an 82 in the class right now (B-) and I really want a A in the class, but I'm not sure it's going to happen because I blew the second test... and maybe the third one. That and I got a 32 in the English section on ACT but the English teacher is consistently giving me C's and D's on my essays... and I can't figure out why :( and I only have an 85 in the class
TL;DR HIGH SCHOOL SUCKS
![]() 02/13/2015 at 01:18 |
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Holy crap... it is seven(!) pages long
That's a lot of ink!
![]() 02/13/2015 at 01:29 |
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Well if I was grading, this would be a low B paper, I don't have a rubric, however I would say an 82. As for your essays, staying on topic is the most important thing. Most people are concerned about grammar, however in all actuality you can still make an A with average grammar. Think of it as a court case. You have to make a specific point. Like for example I wrote a paper about Pride and Prejudice and my thesis was very exact: "Mr. Darcy exhibits the classic symptoms of Avoidant Personality Disorder." The mistake many people make is in making their thesis too broad. A broad thesis is like saying "Wagons are the best cars available" you need to also say how. Now if you were to say "Wagons are the best cars available due to their combination of fuel efficiency, utility, and driving characteristic."
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Ah, I see! So I needed to stay on topic and be more specific?
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Oh just wait till you get to college, I have a 15 page psychological analysis of Mr. Darcy from pride and prejudice. I also have an 18 page paper on the origins of Orpheus and Izangi.
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lol that sounds like fun! /sarc
Well it is 1230AM here and I need to be up before 630... I should probably get to bed :)
Thanks for the help!
![]() 02/13/2015 at 01:36 |
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Pretty much. Though the topic your teacher gave you was pretty shitty and makes it hard to create a good thesis statement other than the one you put. I would maybe say something along the lines of "The U.S. constitution is a living and breathing document due to it's extensive overhaul with the use of amendments, allowing the document to keep up with today's society." Though change that around because now it's on the plagiarism database.
![]() 02/13/2015 at 01:38 |
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No prob, hope you do ok!
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Yeah... I'll do that!
![]() 02/13/2015 at 07:28 |
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Not really sure, I intended this post to go up yesterday at noon. (Scheduled) but instead I guess that didn't really happen.
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Soarer Aerocabin? Looks siiiick.
Also, you win. Kinja decided to be mean and have this scheduled post go up at the complete wrong time.
Pick the next challenge!
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![]() 02/14/2015 at 08:54 |
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Haha, Thanks!
How about a picture of your car being washed?
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Sounds good!
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I hope this keeps going, it's a fun piece.
![]() 02/25/2015 at 15:38 |
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Sorry that I haven't really been able to update it that much, I don't have much free time nowadays.