![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:16 • Filed to: None | ![]() | ![]() |
Pictured first is my tentative business card. Yes, it's vertical. That's what I'm doing. Considering I started with a hat, I'm pretty proud, but feel free to rip it apart.
I tried inverting the color, but that didn't work too well.
Have at it.
![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:18 |
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me gusta
![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:19 |
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Looks good!
![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:22 |
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Thanks!
![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:22 |
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Tomorrow I might try cleaning up that Mustang graphic a bit. My only other suggestion is to space out the lines with the contact info and address a bit. They're kinda squished together.
![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:34 |
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I don't see a single flaw. Well done!!
![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:45 |
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Yeah, the numbers from the email are a bit close to the others, but I can tweak that easily. Stylistically, I wanted it really tightly ordered.
As for the picture, there's quite a few dots on it from once being a piece of fabric. I tried zapping a lot of them, but it takes someone more patient than me. If anything, I thought it made it look older and less clip-art-like. If you're willing to work with it, that's definitely appreciated.
![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:47 |
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Might also help to change the font... using something other than a default font (is that Arial?) goes a LONG ways.
![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:58 |
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10/10 would do business.
![]() 11/23/2014 at 23:59 |
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I heard that from another person too.
I used GothamBold. I was just trying to match the hat really, giving it a retro/nostalgic old-timey feel. The hats are from the early 90s, so I thought they were almost ironically cool again, but I'm certainly biased.
![]() 11/24/2014 at 00:00 |
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I don't like the font on the logo much. Something script might actually look really good, it'd go well with the mustang
EDIT: I also meant to add overall it looks great! I like the vertical business card. If you could add another color it might help. I wonder if black might look better than blue on everything but the logo. Just some thoughts
![]() 11/24/2014 at 00:09 |
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I think the black might clash with the blue since the blue is already so dark.
Now that I've heard it a couple times, the font is starting to bug me. It needs to be brought up to date a bit. I'll probably ditch the arch pattern and go with a thin font.
![]() 11/24/2014 at 00:11 |
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I meant the font for contact info and stuff. Open Sans and Droid Sans (both from Google Fonts) are two of my go-to sans fonts.
![]() 11/24/2014 at 00:44 |
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Ah, I used Tahoma for the contact info. I looked at a bunch of business cards from my wallet, and even the ad agency people used basic fonts for the contact info. I didn't want to go too overboard with it.
However, I've been dicking around with the main font now that it's bugging me. I looked at Singer's page and about shat myself: http://singervehicledesign.com/ They're so on point that it hurts.
So I tried out a thin font design.
I'm not sold on the 'Lauer Service' part yet, but I'm really digging the spaced out 'Restoration & Repair'
![]() 11/24/2014 at 00:50 |
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Yeah, the second one looks really nice. I think the curve fit on the first is a bit fucky.
Singer's site is quite nice, though. A few of their slideshow pics are compressed to hell, but it's a nice design. Not something that couldn't be replicated with codrops templates and tutorials, though.
![]() 11/24/2014 at 01:03 |
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Here's a shitty five-minute attempt at smoothing out that mustang. Some bits are missing and I'll have to fill them in later.
super high res because why not
EDIT: imgur link because kinja:
![]() 11/24/2014 at 01:16 |
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Yeah, my fear now on the 2nd one is that it looks too much like an iPhone. iOS8 font is pretty close. So now I'm at this. I still have to keep the target audience in mind, so I can't go too hip with the design.
I'll be tweaking this damn thing forever until I'm satisfied. I'm torn between the two. Shit.
![]() 11/24/2014 at 01:20 |
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That looks better, though the kerning on the location and phone number is still a bit hard-and-fast
![]() 11/24/2014 at 02:54 |
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Pretty nice. The centered image and right-aligned text bug me though.